Felt like the author had good ideas but had to rush the ending. Like they kept bringing up...

Silentreigns May 19, 2025 3:02 am

Felt like the author had good ideas but had to rush the ending. Like they kept bringing up the ML being a ceramic major so find a way to tie that into the reason why there was an accident in the lab. Or, why wasn't the ML a science-y major? Also there was no reason for buff dude to save glasses with the car. He could have died and nothing would have changed. We should have gotten a couple of chapters seeing how the 2 girls were able to get to that building. Overall, the story started out hot but fizzled out to the end. It should have been foreshadowed that the MC had antibodies earlier also

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