So far I've cringed like once (Rowan saying he's a "panther ") so that's good, but also the pacing is so whack actually. I was hoping I misread and it was 3 months instead of 3 years but it wasn't?? Bro? I feel like the whole love triangle whatever should've been a side story thing instead of something that's already in chapter 14, there's too many subplots, etc. going on at once and I think some parts just need to marinate before moving on. Esp I believe we should've gotten a motive for Rafael immediately pouncing on Rowan + more action with Rowan easing into accepting Rafael instead of immediate reciprocation. Idk man that's just my opinion dawg maybe it'll get better
So far I've cringed like once (Rowan saying he's a "panther ") so that's good, but also the pacing is so whack actually. I was hoping I misread and it was 3 months instead of 3 years but it wasn't?? Bro? I feel like the whole love triangle whatever should've been a side story thing instead of something that's already in chapter 14, there's too many subplots, etc. going on at once and I think some parts just need to marinate before moving on. Esp I believe we should've gotten a motive for Rafael immediately pouncing on Rowan + more action with Rowan easing into accepting Rafael instead of immediate reciprocation. Idk man that's just my opinion dawg maybe it'll get better