The concept was cute, even tho didn’t like the whole knew each other since mc was a child thing, and then the childhood “friend” was so nonsensical it’s like the author was tryna write a grey character but it’s not grey it’s black and white? IDK HOW ELSE TO DESCRIBE HIM, his actions don’t blend together into a believable human personality, he one moment acts like he was worried about mc in childhood how he had walls but then he locked him in a classroom just cause???, in high school he was in the same circle for a while but then acts like he oh so cared about mc being hit with depression and distancing himself, like ohhh it hurt him to see mc go through that but then he’s punching mc, his actions just don’t blend togetherrrrr, and whys he now once again acting like he has nothing but mc’s best interest at heart, whys he jumping against jini like “do you know what he went through cause of you cause you were gone”? Bitch you don’t get to act like this when you were the one to torment him way before jini showed up…
And then the concept of the story was cute but then ch18 gave whiplash cause how did you suddenly kiss and start dating, jini had all those valid concerns about what if mc only thinks he likes him cause he’s all he has and knows and once he sees the real world he’ll let go of him etc, but then mc says I like you and suddenly the problem is changed as if jini only said no cause he thought mc didn’t like him? I literally thought the beach chapter was a special before I checked it was canon chapter…
then the ending was so entirely unnecessary and toxic, the psycho was unnecessary, the psycho being Jinis ex was unnecessary, the kidnapping and sa and poisoning was unnecessary like what’s all that for if you’re not at least gonna show the villain punished?, and genie was set free but he’s still likely an immortal spirit so the mortal X immortal problem still wasn’t solved… like it focused on all the wrong things ToT the simplified plot is abandonment issues, losing him once and feeling hopeless, losing him again and having hope, that’s it
The concept was cute, even tho didn’t like the whole knew each other since mc was a child thing, and then the childhood “friend” was so nonsensical it’s like the author was tryna write a grey character but it’s not grey it’s black and white? IDK HOW ELSE TO DESCRIBE HIM, his actions don’t blend together into a believable human personality, he one moment acts like he was worried about mc in childhood how he had walls but then he locked him in a classroom just cause???, in high school he was in the same circle for a while but then acts like he oh so cared about mc being hit with depression and distancing himself, like ohhh it hurt him to see mc go through that but then he’s punching mc, his actions just don’t blend togetherrrrr, and whys he now once again acting like he has nothing but mc’s best interest at heart, whys he jumping against jini like “do you know what he went through cause of you cause you were gone”? Bitch you don’t get to act like this when you were the one to torment him way before jini showed up…
And then the concept of the story was cute but then ch18 gave whiplash cause how did you suddenly kiss and start dating, jini had all those valid concerns about what if mc only thinks he likes him cause he’s all he has and knows and once he sees the real world he’ll let go of him etc, but then mc says I like you and suddenly the problem is changed as if jini only said no cause he thought mc didn’t like him? I literally thought the beach chapter was a special before I checked it was canon chapter…
then the ending was so entirely unnecessary and toxic, the psycho was unnecessary, the psycho being Jinis ex was unnecessary, the kidnapping and sa and poisoning was unnecessary like what’s all that for if you’re not at least gonna show the villain punished?, and genie was set free but he’s still likely an immortal spirit so the mortal X immortal problem still wasn’t solved… like it focused on all the wrong things ToT the simplified plot is abandonment issues, losing him once and feeling hopeless, losing him again and having hope, that’s it