
THANK GOD SOMEONE SAID IT. This is what personally had envisioned: A raw development of REAL feelings.
The story did start off great, when they first met and had their threesome, but the writing did a whole 180 after that. It feels like the author isn't having a clear vision how to progress this. The sex is the longest part, while the actual plot, emotional development and more is kind of rushed.
Like how did we go from blackmailing to have sex to giggling over some piercings.

I mean that outcome would have been perfect right? Yoh they just wasted what could have been a great plot but honestly when it comes to a lot of BLs nothing surprises me anymore.
And you’re so right because the smut scenes are much longer than the actual plot and this just tells me that they don’t really care about the story but just some porn lol.
Lol this is so stupid, I was kinda liking it at first but then again I was like ‘wtf?!” Because non of this makes no sense, I mean how stupid is Nanjoo? Dude you run a company but you’re being played by two idiots? One is using you for your money and now you giving up your ass for easily for that parasite? Lmao
The plot would have really made sense or hit really hard if Nanjoo and what’s his name just started liking each other organically and start seeing each other behind the twinks back and just let the chaos unfold after that but hey, that’s just me lol.