Idk why but something just feels off with the story like there’s communication happening...

Lilian May 20, 2025 9:30 pm

Idk why but something just feels off with the story like there’s communication happening but it doesn’t solve anything and their relationship just feels a little unstable. I mean of course it’s not gonna be lovey dovey all the time considering both of them went through hard things but idk man.. it’s just they need to set things straight in my opinion. And even if hangeon doesn’t show it i can tell he’s more mentally unstable and anxious than the mc, especially with that bandana covering his wrist. That’s probably why he approached mc bc he felt like mc was someone who could understand him. I just hope he opens up about it and they live happily ever after without mc’s bastard of a father lol i want them to see living safe and happy TT

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    Erys May 21, 2025 11:29 pm

    I agree it is though very early on in the story in my opinion when it comes to development, they clearly have a very high school book complicated as relationship. They’re both a very specific tough spot spots that you can tell. They’re both holding back a lot of information but trying to love each other in the same breath to try to kind of run away from the actual problem and I like all the authors doing something where they’re kind of not showing us enough so we feel anxious. I think this is genuinely the angst. part of everything. I think we’re already there because in my opinion, it starts the minute you start feeling it. It’s not the usual time but I think this suits them for the type of people that they are am I opinion there is a very high chance.

    That they’re going to probably call it quits for a couple years and then go back together years later that could happen in the story. It feels like it suits them, but I don’t think it’s gonna be like this insane big deal. I think it could go two ways it could be a big deal like something really bad even in our point of view or it could be something small but at this point in time irreparable.

    Lilian May 22, 2025 12:10 pm

    Yess, you explained it so well I completely agree w your points. I know they’re gonna have their character developments and it’ll probably all went down soon, showing us how both of them’ll face their problems and even tho I don’t wanna see them sad i know it’s a huge milestone for their relationship . Idk if my comment came off as a little criticizing but i was just sharing an opinion on my observation of the story so far. Like i just know this story is gonna be so good further into the plot that’s why even if we feel uneasy rn i can clearly see their potential and will continue to read it.

    Erys May 22, 2025 4:34 pm
    Yess, you explained it so well I completely agree w your points. I know they’re gonna have their character developments and it’ll probably all went down soon, showing us how both of them’ll face their pro... Lilian

    No, it didn’t and I’m even fascinated. You were able to read that. I did text to speech because I did not feel like writing and did not proofread. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ but no, it’s a normal critique that you have about any book and it’s a good one. I do quite enjoy the weird like not giving us enough information though it makes you anxious and not exactly in a bad or good way.

    Lilian May 23, 2025 6:13 pm
    No, it didn’t and I’m even fascinated. You were able to read that. I did text to speech because I did not feel like writing and did not proofread. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ but no, it’s a normal critique that yo... Erys

    Haha don’t worry it was pretty understandable. ( ̄∇ ̄") The author liked keeping us readers on our toes that’s for sure. The story is probably gonna have it’s breakthrough and im very excited about it (▰˘◡˘▰)