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Fr idk how to feel when he suddenly died like...that's it? Their plan was so quick it all took is one chapter lol
I've got a feeling that the novel is better but I might be wrong tho
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Fr idk how to feel when he suddenly died like...that's it? Their plan was so quick it all took is one chapter lol
I've got a feeling that the novel is better but I might be wrong tho
The romance was getting good but the plot was… just average and anticlimactic. I mean, this whole setting was so good.
They could’ve invested a few chapters for this plan alone. Let the readers truly feel how evil and demeaning Count Rito is. Like, what is his reason for going down the road so badly.
Let the readers sit with him for a few chapters to see him losing his mind, so that we would understand about his villainy more.
We’ve only seen a few scenes of him monologuing and then, suddenly he’s dead.
I’m guessing the author is rushing to finish the story?