Reading this so you dont have to.

LazyGoddess May 21, 2025 2:51 am

I saw the rating and comments, and was like, what could possibly be that bad? Like really I seen some fucked up stories with atleast 6 or 7 something ratings so I looked. And maneee, it is that bad. I shouldn't have read this.

Let's count off the the shit that got me.

1. Art style, I typically stomach stuff with a bad art style if the plot is good. And I've seen people do the same with terrible plots on top of terrible art. But this doesn't make up for it at all. (One chapter, I'm pretty sure his head was levitating by a straight line)

2. Shitty art style but they still jump straight into porn. Okay people rated worse shit higher, gotcha. I mostly phased past the sex scenes while singling out issues.

3. He looks like a fucking child but is 24 which was surprising but im sure that's the author trying not to get flagged. That is a fucking child there's no reason he should be that short in comparison. He looks like a preteen when the ML lifts him.

4. Didn't think it would be OUTRIGHT rape thought it be some werid pseudo incest shit after the wife was noted of. And I don't know what's worse. He was raped not once but twice than technically ever time after because he was brainwashed and tricked into doing those marriage papers.

5. That golf park shit i barely read, that blonde 'couple' was some fucking form of incest and statutory rape because you ain't telling me that boy isn't twelve and they aren't look alike.

6. The boys dick! I save this for last, because wtf? I finally noticed it in the last chapter after zooming through. It's four inches AT MOST, even blurred.

7. Again the penis, your not telling me that's not a fucking child because he sure isn't 24. (No offense to the small kings.)

The author is freaked out, and baby, you haven't seen the half of it. This looks like something some gacha heat kid would make.

Responses
    H0rnFace May 21, 2025 3:15 am

    I actually thought he was a middle school child. I thought since apparently ml isn't in jail, mc would be like 20. Mc is 24 and ml is 44. In my opinion a 20 year age gap just sounds bad