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Omg yeah its reaaally fast paced and i only noticed that when i read it a second time. But i kinda like it that way it gets to the point
Yeah, the main points are getting across but storytelling is much more than that. Connecting points as seamlessly as possible is also important.
Ur damn right manwha expert
I'm just a wanna be writer ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Except for the beginning and kinda fast pacing, I really liked the story. In my opinion, it had much more potential than what was given.
The balance between serious and funny moments would have been just about right if not for the kinda choppy feeling due to the pacing.