The pacing of this webcomic is a bit off. Conversations go on and on in a way that isn't o...

Norn May 21, 2025 10:55 pm

The pacing of this webcomic is a bit off. Conversations go on and on in a way that isn't organic. There was no reason for the MC to explain in minute detail about the preparation process from a management perspective to a guy who clearly already said he doesn't care.

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    noranorano May 21, 2025 11:21 pm

    Adapted from a webnovel. The pacing in this is much faster than the novel, so at least there's that lol

    Norn May 21, 2025 11:59 pm
    Adapted from a webnovel. The pacing in this is much faster than the novel, so at least there's that lol noranorano

    Yeah I know but there are plenty of other webnovels that have much better adaptations of the source material to the webcomic medium in terms of dialogue and visualization through art. The artist is great and has done great paced work before (Max Mojave's Case) so the stilted dialogue and off pacing is really noticable lol.