If you look at the big picture and not just the soulmate thing we got a combo of really annoying elements :
- a disturbing age Gap that is not adressed because they are soulmates you know
- a misogynistic setting (in an omegaverse way) which is seen in the different characters dynamics (docile innocent uke/Powerful seme)
- a seme who never explains anything, who makes the uke insecure all the time (+ too old for him damn). He is just here to save the day when uke is attacked, what a man (he assault him too but well nobody is perfect) ! Annoying guy if you want to lock uke in your house which is a stupid idea btw, at least do not let your mother have access to the house
- an incredibly innocent uke who never learns from his mistakes : just to clarify he is not to blame for being attacked but after a few times we could wish he become a bit more careful PLEASE WAKE UP you scare me EVERY chapter. And why does he seem so lost, I get that he become an omega but he was a capable guy in the first chapter, why does he look this unfit to be in the aristocratic world while his parents are also originally quite rich, didn't he live in this world ? By the way the parents are total jokes to let their son go with a man they don't know like that they don't deserve to be called parents. + accept to come back with seme after being assaulted or going back to your best friend like you had forgot he also assaulted you I don't really know which one is the saddest, this boy needs a psy more than a lover. I see he is traumatized but I want to slap him every chapter to wake this poor delusional soul, thank god he seems to find a bit of confidence in the last chapters because despite his frustrating sides he is a victim of others and deserves to be happy
- every side characters either hate mc or want his body
- attempted assault (multiple this by 10)
We even got the mother in law giving money to stay away from her son, the cliche are clicheeing
I don't usually critic a story like that but this one got me annoyed more than others because it just adds these elements one after the other
If you look at the big picture and not just the soulmate thing we got a combo of really annoying elements :
- a disturbing age Gap that is not adressed because they are soulmates you know
- a misogynistic setting (in an omegaverse way) which is seen in the different characters dynamics (docile innocent uke/Powerful seme)
- a seme who never explains anything, who makes the uke insecure all the time (+ too old for him damn). He is just here to save the day when uke is attacked, what a man (he assault him too but well nobody is perfect) ! Annoying guy if you want to lock uke in your house which is a stupid idea btw, at least do not let your mother have access to the house
- an incredibly innocent uke who never learns from his mistakes : just to clarify he is not to blame for being attacked but after a few times we could wish he become a bit more careful PLEASE WAKE UP you scare me EVERY chapter. And why does he seem so lost, I get that he become an omega but he was a capable guy in the first chapter, why does he look this unfit to be in the aristocratic world while his parents are also originally quite rich, didn't he live in this world ? By the way the parents are total jokes to let their son go with a man they don't know like that they don't deserve to be called parents.
+ accept to come back with seme after being assaulted or going back to your best friend like you had forgot he also assaulted you I don't really know which one is the saddest, this boy needs a psy more than a lover. I see he is traumatized but I want to slap him every chapter to wake this poor delusional soul, thank god he seems to find a bit of confidence in the last chapters because despite his frustrating sides he is a victim of others and deserves to be happy
- every side characters either hate mc or want his body
- attempted assault (multiple this by 10)
We even got the mother in law giving money to stay away from her son, the cliche are clicheeing
I don't usually critic a story like that but this one got me annoyed more than others because it just adds these elements one after the other