Ew, this looks so predatory and ugly. I hope the author quits and never writes and draws a...

trashfate May 22, 2025 8:29 pm

Ew, this looks so predatory and ugly. I hope the author quits and never writes and draws again. Please fucking put the pencil down. Let me guess... this is a straight woman that fetishizes gay relationships that made this? Typical. Grown ass adult making pedo and rape goon stories, you're disgusting.

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    jo May 22, 2025 9:01 pm

    …you do realize most if not all the yaoi on this website were created by women right!

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:03 pm
    …you do realize most if not all the yaoi on this website were created by women right! jo

    I didn't say all of it were, do you have a reading comprehension? I said for this specific story, this is definitely a straight woman that made this and most straight women do create yaoi like these for other women to enjoy. Like, do you realize there's something called reading or do you not have eyes? I think you're just a dumbass.

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:07 pm
    …you do realize most if not all the yaoi on this website were created by women right! jo

    This is why stupid fucks shouldn't reply to me unless they know how to read. My patience is low with people like you.

    kay May 22, 2025 9:08 pm
    I didn't say all of it were, do you have a reading comprehension? I said for this specific story, this is definitely a straight woman that made this and most straight women do create yaoi like these for other w... trashfate

    Most yaoi on this site including the ones you read are made by straight women for straight women. Idk what kind of point you’re trying to make or if you’re just stupid on purpose

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:11 pm
    Most yaoi on this site including the ones you read are made by straight women for straight women. Idk what kind of point you’re trying to make or if you’re just stupid on purpose kay

    You literally just repeated what I said and the whole point I was trying to make... are you restarted? Unless you replied to me by accident and meant to respond to that other person, because if this isn't a mistake this is just sad for you. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    kay May 22, 2025 9:16 pm
    You literally just repeated what I said and the whole point I was trying to make... are you restarted? Unless you replied to me by accident and meant to respond to that other person, because if this isn't a mis... trashfate

    Never mind, I don’t like arguing with people who are clearly challenged

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:16 pm

    I love making people mad with the hard truth. I'm sorry that yaoi mostly being created by straight women more than men offends you, but I won't change my comment to fit your comfort. I said what I said, be a whimpy bitch about it I guess!

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:17 pm
    I love making people mad with the hard truth. I'm sorry that yaoi mostly being created by straight women more than men offends you, but I won't change my comment to fit your comfort. I said what I said, be a wh... trashfate

    *wimpy

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:26 pm
    …you do realize most if not all the yaoi on this website were created by women right! jo

    Oh wait I think I read your comment and that other person's comment wrong... I think I'm the stupid one. You both are still dumbasses though because that's what I was trying to say, no shit... although I disagree a little bit. I wouldn't say ALL straight women create these types of stories just MOST, which was my point here, but why would I need to specify that? It should be common sense. ( ̄へ ̄)

    jo May 22, 2025 9:31 pm
    Oh wait I think I read your comment and that other person's comment wrong... I think I'm the stupid one. You both are still dumbasses though because that's what I was trying to say, no shit... although I disagr... trashfate

    oh my god you’re so fucking retarded LMFAOOOO

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:37 pm
    Never mind, I don’t like arguing with people who are clearly challenged kay

    Fuck you too.

    trashfate May 22, 2025 9:39 pm
    oh my god you’re so fucking retarded LMFAOOOO jo

    I thought you were saying not all women create yaoi when you were saying they all do, which is still disagree with on the "all" thing. Maybe learn how to write and I wouldn't misunderstand ya. Also, I'm half-asleep, so I'm actually not but you are.

    jo May 22, 2025 9:59 pm
    I thought you were saying not all women create yaoi when you were saying they all do, which is still disagree with on the "all" thing. Maybe learn how to write and I wouldn't misunderstand ya. Also, I'm half-as... trashfate

    “Maybe learn how to write”

    My comment meant exactly what it said. Ignoring the 3 commas I excluded, my comment was grammatically correct and functionally EASILY understandable. You’re just the dumbest fucking retard to ever exist. You even fucking admitted it, you sad, sad dumbass. English isn’t even my first language, and I have better grammar than you; take a good look at your own fucking grammar before calling me a retard, retard.

    trashfate May 22, 2025 10:15 pm
    “Maybe learn how to write”My comment meant exactly what it said. Ignoring the 3 commas I excluded, my comment was grammatically correct and functionally EASILY understandable. You’re just the dumbest fuck... jo

    Your comment wasn't grammatically correct at all, but okay sure buddy. If you like living in your own delusional bubble then be my guest. But you also misunderstood what my original comment was saying too. I was saying most straight women do create yaoi and I was asking a satire statement in a form of a question! So you still are one and that won't change. Maybe that's why you're on this website, to get free reading lessons.

    kay May 22, 2025 10:48 pm
    Your comment wasn't grammatically correct at all, but okay sure buddy. If you like living in your own delusional bubble then be my guest. But you also misunderstood what my original comment was saying too. I wa... trashfate

    Maybe you should get off of this website and read an actual book good lord

    jo May 22, 2025 11:18 pm
    Your comment wasn't grammatically correct at all, but okay sure buddy. If you like living in your own delusional bubble then be my guest. But you also misunderstood what my original comment was saying too. I wa... trashfate

    You are an actual fucking retard LMFAOOOOO

    Is English your first language? I’d feel really bad for you if it were. I hope you know how absolutely braindead you sound. If you ever do need English lessons, let me know, though!

    trashfate May 22, 2025 11:38 pm
    You are an actual fucking retard LMFAOOOOO Is English your first language? I’d feel really bad for you if it were. I hope you know how absolutely braindead you sound. If you ever do need English lessons, let ... jo

    I was half-asleep, I don't think you could relate to being fucking half-asleep and having a part awake part asleep brain because you're too busy being such a bitch. Even if English wasn't my first language I'll never ask an illiterate person for help. Stfu and get off my case, this argument been over.

    jo May 23, 2025 12:53 am
    I was half-asleep, I don't think you could relate to being fucking half-asleep and having a part awake part asleep brain because you're too busy being such a bitch. Even if English wasn't my first language I'll... trashfate

    Correction:

    In your first sentence, you connected two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice error. Instead, you should have inserted a coordinating conjunction, a semicolon, or a period. You also forgot a period in between “part awake” and “part asleep”.

    In your second sentence, you forgot a comma in between “language” and “I’ll”. You also should have used “I’d” instead of “I’ll”.

    In your last sentence, you AGAIN connected two independent clauses with just a comma (another comma splice error). You also forgot the “has” in between “argument” and “been”.

    jo May 23, 2025 12:56 am
    I was half-asleep, I don't think you could relate to being fucking half-asleep and having a part awake part asleep brain because you're too busy being such a bitch. Even if English wasn't my first language I'll... trashfate

    Also, what does me being smarter than you have to do with me being tired? Your logic, not just your grammar, is flawed!

    I shall now make an educated guess about your age: I estimate that it is between 13-16.

    trashfate May 23, 2025 1:01 am
    Correction:In your first sentence, you connected two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice error. Instead, you should have inserted a coordinating conjunction, a semicolon, or a period.... jo

    Okay??? Do I care??? I'm not typing a research essay I don't give a damn about grammar on an illegal site, pay me 100 an hour and I'll write like William Shakespeare.