the entire fucking plot of this thing is mc faces abuse oh man that is such a beautiful me...

Pongesponge May 23, 2025 12:52 pm

the entire fucking plot of this thing is
mc faces abuse
oh man that is such a beautiful metaphor for suffering
aaaaand they're fucking again

HELLO??? hit em with the "awww he's been alone his whole life and only after experiencing physical affection for the first time he realises how much he craved human touch. favourite trope behaviour. wow why was that lowkey so beautiful. aww he drew him a bath so fluffy. awww he doesn't want to be lonely. awwww monster mugo wants him there too" and then there are 2 giant penises entering him completely unlubed unprepared without asking with no warning for no reason immediately after he got raped by some strange spirit.

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    bych boy May 23, 2025 1:07 pm

    i agree but i will say 1 thing, i completely forget this is A/B/O, omegas get wet back there so unlubed snd unprepared doesn’t really matter here

    Pongesponge May 23, 2025 1:12 pm
    i agree but i will say 1 thing, i completely forget this is A/B/O, omegas get wet back there so unlubed snd unprepared doesn’t really matter here bych boy

    women also naturally get wet u can't just shove 2 penises up there

    Alloki May 23, 2025 1:45 pm
    women also naturally get wet u can't just shove 2 penises up there Pongesponge

    You forgot that this is not real life it’s a story

    Pongesponge May 23, 2025 2:00 pm
    You forgot that this is not real life it’s a story Alloki

    ..... fucking obviously I know it's not real life
    that doesn't mean i can't critique it??
    if a piece of fiction could get by with anything just because it was fiction, then nothing would have value.
    sure it's fictional, but having sex isn't fictional. it's a thing. that happens.
    when unrealistic unestablished things happen, it breaks the immersion. I am providing my opinion on the break of the immersion.

    bych boy May 23, 2025 4:00 pm
    women also naturally get wet u can't just shove 2 penises up there Pongesponge

    butt holes are different than conchas, also again it’s omegaverse they have crazy anatomy i think you have to take a lot of things with a grain of salt

    bych boy May 23, 2025 4:02 pm
    ..... fucking obviously I know it's not real lifethat doesn't mean i can't critique it?? if a piece of fiction could get by with anything just because it was fiction, then nothing would have value. sure it's fi... Pongesponge

    girl what’s the immersion? one of them is a snake curse god and the other one can get pregnant and gives birth out of his butt. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ like one of them has TENTACLES made of SMOKE. anatomy is out the window