Responses

..... fucking obviously I know it's not real life
that doesn't mean i can't critique it??
if a piece of fiction could get by with anything just because it was fiction, then nothing would have value.
sure it's fictional, but having sex isn't fictional. it's a thing. that happens.
when unrealistic unestablished things happen, it breaks the immersion. I am providing my opinion on the break of the immersion.
the entire fucking plot of this thing is
mc faces abuse
oh man that is such a beautiful metaphor for suffering
aaaaand they're fucking again
HELLO??? hit em with the "awww he's been alone his whole life and only after experiencing physical affection for the first time he realises how much he craved human touch. favourite trope behaviour. wow why was that lowkey so beautiful. aww he drew him a bath so fluffy. awww he doesn't want to be lonely. awwww monster mugo wants him there too" and then there are 2 giant penises entering him completely unlubed unprepared without asking with no warning for no reason immediately after he got raped by some strange spirit.