
I think that the story is for the mature old pple. Smut is good but at some point you'll want a plot especially if you re a woman in her late 20s , 30s ...etc . We love drama and mystery and a slow burn . So I can understand why some pple complain from the story. We ve all been there where we saw the " mature " label , and skipped the whole plot for those hot scenes . So it s just a matter of time for them too they ll come back to this story and just say " wow , the plot was good "

it's like people on this god forsaken website are immune to reading between the lines. they're so used to shitty story telling and stories where everything is direct and the story ends as soon as the characters fall in love. they see a few smut scenes and characters who are all hot and call it porn with a plot when it's far from that, we've seen our girl recovering from severe mental issues. she was so empty at the beginning and now she's filling with life but people are so focused on the art and the "lack of plot" when there's literally a plot in our faces. so tired of people lol
guys one of the plot devices is MYSTERY (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ not the typical horror mystery but in the way that things aren't gonna be laid out in pure flashbacks, it's hinted at and shown briefly. the focus is on haesoo and taehas relationship growing stronger BEFORE the plot moves because that's how it is in REAL LIFE!!! them having sex brought them closer (as we can see haesoo is getting possessive and insecure due to her trauma) and NOW the plot will start moving!!!
we KNOW that taehas family is weird. they're all fucking weirdos. we know taeha was a sick child who had heart surgery and was abused by his family, im hthinking mainly his brother out of jealousy. we don't know about his mom, who i assume is dead or abroad and his dad seems to be distant and only checks in occasionally. his brother is a delinquent who causes issues (has at least one kid) who his dad doesn't approve of. taeha seems to be favored even though he has a different mother from his brother and seems to be a better suit for the candidate.
haesoo grew up poor, abused and neglected. trauma bonded with mincheol who also was abused and poor. at one point she had a miscarriage and probably can't have another child.
we don't don't know why taeha is obsessed with haesoo, but he began stalking her before the story started. i think he got mincheol a job so he could get into haesoos life.
just because things aren't laid out in our faces doesn't mean they don't exist. the story is a slow burn story, romantic and plot wise. haesoo was in her marriage for a damn decade so ofc things aren't gonna move fast!
and if yall have a problem with the art don't fucking read it!! you're aexist if you think it's an issue if a man is writing it. i've seen women create absolutely terrible BL's with the most questionable art and most sexualized men but don't see anyone talking abt that. yall are just hypocrites