10 chapters in but something is missing. I don’t feel anything for the characters rlly. I feel annoyed but it’s not that deep bcus I personally cannot find myself continuing to care. Does this resolve soon? The story wants to be an onion but it feels like a one sheet on paper.
10 chapters in but something is missing. I don’t feel anything for the characters rlly. I feel annoyed but it’s not that deep bcus I personally cannot find myself continuing to care. Does this resolve soon? The story wants to be an onion but it feels like a one sheet on paper.