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AAHHH I JUST FINISHED IT AT 4 AM BECAUSE EVEN IF I DIDNT REALLY CARE AT FIRST, THE PLOT TWISTSSSS KEPT ME AWAKE!!! I RECO TO FINISH IT BUT ITS ALSO FINE IF U CANT!! U'LL MISS OUT A LOT IF U STOP BUT THATS JUST WHAT I THINK ^^
10 chapters in but something is missing. I don’t feel anything for the characters rlly. I feel annoyed but it’s not that deep bcus I personally cannot find myself continuing to care. Does this resolve soon? The story wants to be an onion but it feels like a one sheet on paper.