Responses
Well, it IS a chronic disorder that needs constant treatment.
Ik but I think there could be different ways to execute it or to drive the plot forward
Well, as long as bf was around he was fine, because he was taking his medicine.
While bf was gone he had no more medicine.
And of course mc is a workaholic who thinks less of his life than his work so he continued to push the limits until someone tried to kill him and the barrier broke and he nearly died again.
The story is rly cute but it’s getting so repetitive (@_@) like mc gets sick ml saves him again and again and again I’m not rly mad about it because I eat this shit up but I feel like there could be better ways for them to become closer. Sometimes they have zero chemistry istg… still i like the story I want new chapters