This is gonna be all over the place, fair warning.
I should’ve stopped after the first chapter but I locked in cuz I always finish shit unless it’s really really bad, but like I kinda wish I would’ve stopped. This was just the train crash that kept giving - a plane hit it and it exploded again. Then a propane truck flipped over the wreck and it combusted once more. You just can’t take your eyes away when you’re already looking.
I don’t even know where to begin with this. It’s not even that I deplore it, but I do hate it. Taking away the first part of the story, which is horrifying and sets up the entire ambience of the story - You find it hard to fully step away since the bottom seems to like(?) it to an extent (but not really this is fully abuse… god it even felt wrong to write that, bottom just canonically doesn’t like to think, please someone get him a common sense teacher asap) and even then the top always takes it way too fucking far. Top is so emotionally constipated he makes the bottom suffer and the reason he doesn’t like stupid people is becuz he himself is a fucking dumbass. He meshes with other idiots becuz he can’t seem to fucking think for a moment before fucking acting. He turns his brain off and not even a single brain cell can light anything in him to ignite a thought.
And SPOILERS BELOW!
yes the bottom is dumb, he clearly wants to take it easy in life and he’s not too different from some other cookie cutter himbo bottoms seen - it’s just he got the worst fucking luck with tops. He was in HIS FULL RIGHT TO SLEEP WITH WHO HE WANTED SINCE THE TOP DID NOT WANT TO DATE HIM. However, given how genuinely abusive the top is, you just KNEW shit was gonna go side ways.
I can’t really expect this story to get any better really.
This is gonna be all over the place, fair warning.
I should’ve stopped after the first chapter but I locked in cuz I always finish shit unless it’s really really bad, but like I kinda wish I would’ve stopped.
This was just the train crash that kept giving - a plane hit it and it exploded again. Then a propane truck flipped over the wreck and it combusted once more.
You just can’t take your eyes away when you’re already looking.
I don’t even know where to begin with this. It’s not even that I deplore it, but I do hate it.
Taking away the first part of the story, which is horrifying and sets up the entire ambience of the story - You find it hard to fully step away since the bottom seems to like(?) it to an extent (but not really this is fully abuse… god it even felt wrong to write that, bottom just canonically doesn’t like to think, please someone get him a common sense teacher asap) and even then the top always takes it way too fucking far.
Top is so emotionally constipated he makes the bottom suffer and the reason he doesn’t like stupid people is becuz he himself is a fucking dumbass. He meshes with other idiots becuz he can’t seem to fucking think for a moment before fucking acting. He turns his brain off and not even a single brain cell can light anything in him to ignite a thought.
And SPOILERS BELOW!
yes the bottom is dumb, he clearly wants to take it easy in life and he’s not too different from some other cookie cutter himbo bottoms seen - it’s just he got the worst fucking luck with tops. He was in HIS FULL RIGHT TO SLEEP WITH WHO HE WANTED SINCE THE TOP DID NOT WANT TO DATE HIM. However, given how genuinely abusive the top is, you just KNEW shit was gonna go side ways.
I can’t really expect this story to get any better really.