The overall beginning of the story was good. But it’s way too rushed for my liking. I’m sure that this rushed beginning will cause further problems, confusion and frustration for the next chapters (not only for the reader but the characters as well) so either we will get a lot of conflicts from the vampire clan and OR from that asshole of a friend who not only played with my babies feelings but also cheated on his fiancé. Like dude wtf is your problem?! Gtfo of here (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Anyway, I’m still excited to see how this will progress in the future ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
The overall beginning of the story was good. But it’s way too rushed for my liking. I’m sure that this rushed beginning will cause further problems, confusion and frustration for the next chapters (not only for the reader but the characters as well) so either we will get a lot of conflicts from the vampire clan and OR from that asshole of a friend who not only played with my babies feelings but also cheated on his fiancé. Like dude wtf is your problem?! Gtfo of here (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Anyway, I’m still excited to see how this will progress in the future ლ(´ڡ`ლ)