This could have been great if a) it wasn't a drunk conception b) if it didn't jump from event to event and had a bit more detail into why the characters were doing xyz c) (idk if it's just me but) the characters already have a bit of depth but it's kind of wasted because ... referring back to point b ... it jumps forward so much d) and authors need to not be so afraid of keeping their characters apart for more than a couple days - the baby barely grew half a millimetre before they were back together, like what???? There is so much more need and desperation (at least from one side of the party) the longer they're separated. It's not like the uke is gonna forget the seme after 5 business days of being separated.
They could have done so much with that one line "call your parents and tell them this baby is yours" that is such a powerful line that ive never heard in an ABO before and then they do barely anything with it. I was so disappointed.
Don't get me wrong, I like this manhwa, but authors are literally going around and around in the same old plot circle because a lot of readers like to be spoon fed this kinda stuff cause we don't have to think too hard, but it's kinda getting overdone at this point with less and less thought behind it each new release.
This could have been great if
a) it wasn't a drunk conception
b) if it didn't jump from event to event and had a bit more detail into why the characters were doing xyz
c) (idk if it's just me but) the characters already have a bit of depth but it's kind of wasted because ... referring back to point b ... it jumps forward so much
d) and authors need to not be so afraid of keeping their characters apart for more than a couple days - the baby barely grew half a millimetre before they were back together, like what???? There is so much more need and desperation (at least from one side of the party) the longer they're separated. It's not like the uke is gonna forget the seme after 5 business days of being separated.
They could have done so much with that one line "call your parents and tell them this baby is yours" that is such a powerful line that ive never heard in an ABO before and then they do barely anything with it. I was so disappointed.
Don't get me wrong, I like this manhwa, but authors are literally going around and around in the same old plot circle because a lot of readers like to be spoon fed this kinda stuff cause we don't have to think too hard, but it's kinda getting overdone at this point with less and less thought behind it each new release.