That doesn’t make any sense they literally have only one body lol I wouldn’t have expe...

orphaxx May 30, 2025 2:40 am

That doesn’t make any sense they literally have only one body lol I wouldn’t have expected such sloppy writing from this author tbh
+ the smut wasn’t a good read at all, knowing MC literally got raped 2 chapters ago, I’m actually low key disgusted by jerk mugo too. Why would you do that?

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    Gragill May 30, 2025 2:44 am

    I think it is implied MC is hallucinating the snakes as another body. There is only one body.

    orphaxx May 30, 2025 2:48 am
    I think it is implied MC is hallucinating the snakes as another body. There is only one body. Gragill

    I mean that’s what I thought in the last chapter too but why showing that for another whole chapter? Most people would’ve guessed that from the last chapter tbh. It’s also sloppy IMO if authors feel the need to show SA for more than a scene in a chapter. It’s unnecessary and if anything romanticises rape, which is something this author didn’t do in their past works.

    Gragill May 30, 2025 2:50 am
    I mean that’s what I thought in the last chapter too but why showing that for another whole chapter? Most people would’ve guessed that from the last chapter tbh. It’s also sloppy IMO if authors feel the n... orphaxx

    Oh yeah I agree with the rape point. I'm just saying the thing about the snakes.

    orphaxx May 30, 2025 2:51 am

    And to see that a lot of people say that smut is hot just validates my thoughts about the romanticism part

    orphaxx May 30, 2025 2:55 am
    Oh yeah I agree with the rape point. I'm just saying the thing about the snakes. Gragill

    Ahh but yeah, I agree normally with the snake part I just tried to make sense out of the chapter, because I like this author v much and wouldn’t have thought they will go this way with this story..just me being delulu