I liked it but I think the main issue with the writing and "rushed" ending is that the villains are just too dumb. The plot really can be spelled as people going: "Hey, don't mess with Grace, she's kinda crazy" and the villains going: "I'm gonna do that anyway"
[spoiler] Like the big plot was framing quite literally the MOST loyal house to the crown for DECADES because... *checks notes* the obvious villains weren't there... like huh??? So them having an alibi is good and dandy, by why not check if the least likely suspect and least likely to gain from killing royalty also has an alibi
Immature ass father, stupid ass sister (like literally what was her angle), dumb ass rival house, greedy ass younger princess
I liked it but I think the main issue with the writing and "rushed" ending is that the villains are just too dumb.
The plot really can be spelled as people going: "Hey, don't mess with Grace, she's kinda crazy" and the villains going: "I'm gonna do that anyway"
[spoiler]
Like the big plot was framing quite literally the MOST loyal house to the crown for DECADES because... *checks notes* the obvious villains weren't there... like huh??? So them having an alibi is good and dandy, by why not check if the least likely suspect and least likely to gain from killing royalty also has an alibi
Immature ass father, stupid ass sister (like literally what was her angle), dumb ass rival house, greedy ass younger princess