I usually love cliches, but even this is a bit much .. Teenage fluff perhaps. Drawings are pretty. Basic premise is kind of inviting. And yet, execution of the story is bad... Storytelling is weak. Plot development is nonsensical. Dialogues are a lil illogical and distorted sometimes. I have never seen a FL that has never tripped on flat floor and rescued (happens quite a lot in here). Plot armor and forced romance is just nothing creative. Made me wonder if this whole story and dialogue are written by a teenager because everything just feels very immature. Nice for a light read I guess.
I usually love cliches, but even this is a bit much .. Teenage fluff perhaps. Drawings are pretty. Basic premise is kind of inviting. And yet, execution of the story is bad... Storytelling is weak. Plot development is nonsensical. Dialogues are a lil illogical and distorted sometimes. I have never seen a FL that has never tripped on flat floor and rescued (happens quite a lot in here). Plot armor and forced romance is just nothing creative. Made me wonder if this whole story and dialogue are written by a teenager because everything just feels very immature. Nice for a light read I guess.