Im tweaking wdym his ex is also in there WITH A CHILD'S BODY? DONT TELL ME HE GOES BACK TO...

DieyckRider2312 May 31, 2025 12:59 am

Im tweaking wdym his ex is also in there WITH A CHILD'S BODY? DONT TELL ME HE GOES BACK TOGETHER WITH HER???

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    Nizze May 31, 2025 2:56 am

    Yeah... that just made me lose any sliver of hope I had for this and completely drop it... another story screwed over by a bad harem...

    NekoNeko2 May 31, 2025 3:02 am

    I've read the novel. They don't know the other one is also stuck in that world.

    Nizze May 31, 2025 3:23 am
    I've read the novel. They don't know the other one is also stuck in that world. NekoNeko2

    Does the novel also focuses that much on the pov of the women around him? I'm majorly disappointed with how little of him and the "main plot" we get compared to that...
    Honestly even if he doesn't know it's her... just the fact the author gave her that young of a body when she was a grown woman in her og world is... irksome... like... 2 students, 1 ex now teen, 1 legal loli, 1 crossdressing assistant, 1 current world ex that acts like a teen, 1 mercenary and 1 adopted sister... that's 8 women involved with him in some way... and at least half of them... have... young bodies... that's really... not very nice... to say the least... u.u"

    NekoNeko2 May 31, 2025 6:24 am
    Does the novel also focuses that much on the pov of the women around him? I'm majorly disappointed with how little of him and the "main plot" we get compared to that...Honestly even if he doesn't know it's her.... Nizze

    POV spoilers...

    but the main POVs per part of the story are

    1st arc: Epherene, Sylvia
    2nd & 3rd arc: Deculein, Empress, Julie
    4th arc: Sylvia, Deculein, Epherene, Empress
    5th onwards: Empress, Deculein, Julie, Sylvia/Epherene



    The novel focuses on the worldbuilding THROUGH other characs POVs. It's annoying at first because Epherene and Sylvia are the main POVs we're starting with.

    And they're kids.

    It gets better tho once we reach 2nd arc.

    In Search for two di-sticks May 31, 2025 8:19 am
    POV spoilers...but the main POVs per part of the story are1st arc: Epherene, Sylvia2nd & 3rd arc: Deculein, Empress, Julie4th arc: Sylvia, Deculein, Epherene, Empress5th onwards: Empress, Deculein, Julie, S... NekoNeko2

    Uhmm quick question is it harem? And if not will he fell inlove with any "child" character? Who?

    Nizze May 31, 2025 9:16 am
    POV spoilers...but the main POVs per part of the story are1st arc: Epherene, Sylvia2nd & 3rd arc: Deculein, Empress, Julie4th arc: Sylvia, Deculein, Epherene, Empress5th onwards: Empress, Deculein, Julie, S... NekoNeko2

    Ty... unfortunately I think Julie is as annoying as the 2 teens... if not more, honestly...
    I guess author tried to do something nice showing other characters pov and world building through it... I didn't feel much of it on the comic tho... 90% of their pov was just... them whining that they hate him but they admire/like him at the same time and they hate that they feel this way...
    And honestly... the fact that mc is basically the only guy on it... bothers me more than I'd like to admit... the fact all other pov you mentioned are women's... doesn't help... it makes me feel misogynistic... but it's just... the women in this kinds of work are usually just... so annoying and exagerated and overall badly made... it makes me wish they weren't there at all... and that makes me feel so bad I rather not read it... Maybe if it was balanced between guys and girls I wouldn't feel that bad...
    Anyway thanks for the info... I don't think I'll enjoy the read... both comic and novel... unfortunately...

    NekoNeko2 May 31, 2025 11:58 am
    Uhmm quick question is it harem? And if not will he fell inlove with any "child" character? Who? In Search for two di-sticks

    no harem or romance actually.