Mini-Review: Good Read!

ReviewRaptor May 31, 2025 1:07 am

Lovely art, good storytelling and both characters are endearing in their own ways.
The only issue I have is that the falling in love part was rather randomly quick. I wish that part was done a little more carefully so we can see the other person catch feelings.
It's still a good read however! The details and dialogue as well as emotions in general are done well. Makes it worth re-reading I'd say. :)

Responses
    LeatherKitten July 28, 2025 6:03 am

    My gripe as well! We could have gotten a few more dates or bonding moments before the admissions of love. Not a bad story, though

    Beka August 13, 2025 7:04 pm

    Thats usually Scarlet Beriko's weak point, her character relationships are usually just because one is a Love freak that falls deeply without much thought, and it develops from there, without much explanation.