Honestly, idk how to feel yet. I feel like the story is walking a tight rope rn and how th...

SpicyCacti May 31, 2025 5:43 am

Honestly, idk how to feel yet. I feel like the story is walking a tight rope rn and how the author proceeds going further in could make or break the story for me. Like the characterization going forward. How will the mc treat the ml going forward? What about his own morality? and how these elements interact? I just feel like a lot could go wrong and i dont quite know how to articulate these worries to full clarity. im not dropping or anything, just waiting, reading, and hoping things dont get wobbly in terms of characterization/realism with the context given , if that makes any sense at all

sorry. i expect many dislikes. open to comments and discourse.

Responses
    Lilmushroom May 31, 2025 5:47 am

    True. I really hope the author doesn't ruin it cuz this is an interesting story.

    SpicyCacti May 31, 2025 6:05 am
    True. I really hope the author doesn't ruin it cuz this is an interesting story. Lilmushroom

    yeah, like the premise and setting is great. the potential is there. This is a rare bl that has the capacity to go beyond just being another story that manages to get by with just a mediocre story, questionable but acceptable characters, great art and great art of snu like the popularized BLs on this site. This could be really interesting from a psychological standpoint with moral dilemma. The possibilities man

    But I could just be building it all up in my head. Prob am. better to have low expectations, less likely for it to fall flat in comparison to the heights of abstract imagination:'

    Lilmushroom May 31, 2025 12:06 pm
    yeah, like the premise and setting is great. the potential is there. This is a rare bl that has the capacity to go beyond just being another story that manages to get by with just a mediocre story, questionable... SpicyCacti

    You spoke my mind. I feel the same way.