Okay first of all the art style is very pretty but why does it switch up part way through? Kainel was a long haired pretty man and then he suddenly looked more generic and buff. And then there's the pacing. At first it's very slow, but then the climax was rushed and poorly explained. a little bit of unnecessary narrative especially in the beginning when the story was slower. Also don't even get me started on the translations towards the last 30 or so chapters. The name and title changes, and the continuous typos made it a headache to read. Some key factors to the story such as Arka should have been more thoroughly explained or emphasized to make it seem more important. And this is just a small nitpick but also where does the nickname Tiara come from?? I would understand if it was Tiana tho.
SPOILERS FROM HERE Tatiana's condition was never properly explained so it felt like a plot hole, in addition to the memory loss of the crown prince (which was also never explained) feels like there's something more to this. why does Kainel not want to leave traces of his existence in the world?? (This might've been explained but idk) What was the point of the Viscountess giving away half of her possessions for the blood of a prince, Kainel should've just told her so she could get a refund. And although i understand where the viscountess was coming from she should've apologized to Kainel for how cruel she was before. Also if the Viscountess loved Tatiana so much why try and sell her away to the Duke (it was kinda explained but as u get deeper in the story the less it makes sense but ig there was a contract
Okay first of all the art style is very pretty but why does it switch up part way through? Kainel was a long haired pretty man and then he suddenly looked more generic and buff.
And then there's the pacing. At first it's very slow, but then the climax was rushed and poorly explained. a little bit of unnecessary narrative especially in the beginning when the story was slower.
Also don't even get me started on the translations towards the last 30 or so chapters. The name and title changes, and the continuous typos made it a headache to read.
Some key factors to the story such as Arka should have been more thoroughly explained or emphasized to make it seem more important.
And this is just a small nitpick but also where does the nickname Tiara come from?? I would understand if it was Tiana tho.
SPOILERS FROM HERE
Tatiana's condition was never properly explained so it felt like a plot hole, in addition to the memory loss of the crown prince (which was also never explained) feels like there's something more to this.
why does Kainel not want to leave traces of his existence in the world?? (This might've been explained but idk)
What was the point of the Viscountess giving away half of her possessions for the blood of a prince, Kainel should've just told her so she could get a refund.
And although i understand where the viscountess was coming from she should've apologized to Kainel for how cruel she was before.
Also if the Viscountess loved Tatiana so much why try and sell her away to the Duke (it was kinda explained but as u get deeper in the story the less it makes sense but ig there was a contract