The ex plot-lines were super unnecessary and did nothing but generate some angst to drive ...

Irene June 2, 2025 11:17 am

The ex plot-lines were super unnecessary and did nothing but generate some angst to drive the plot longer. It's not like it served much purpose either because it didn't look like it resolved anything by the end. Souta was insecure until the last minute, so it's not like the ex's presence existed to solve any of that. Both of those married bastards were literally there to be annoying. This entire manga would be wrapped up in 5 chapters if it wasn't for the constant ex drama and assault. Like, WHAT the fuck. The art is nice, the sex is good but the plot is all over the place.

The events in chapter 4 almost made me drop it. Souta goes to his ex's house instead of clarifying to Kento that they ARE dating. Like boy, c'mon. Your current partner takes precedence over whatever plan you have with your ex. Don't get me started on the EXPLICIT assault. How was any of that necessary? Yikes. The author could have written that by making Souta properly talk it out with his ex in a cafe and breaking up with him properly. That assault was an ass addition to make.

What I liked was the switch though. They technically did switch but Souta still felt like he was bottoming while Kento was topping lmao. But at least Kento was an enthusiastic bottom, which I liked. I need more tops who want to be enthusiastic bottoms.

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