okay so basically I just found this on TikTok and since it's short, I thought maybe I can give this a quick read and see how it is. IT IS BAD. At first I was wondering why there was smut when in my point of view it was kind of necessary, but then all of a sudden I remember the panel where he says he had YEARNED for his lover and obviously that might have been part of the yearning part and also somehow a message on what love/yearning could do to people or something along the lines of those. THANKFULLY IT'S SHORT because I wouldn't have survived.
As for mc's feelings, totally valid. When you lost someone, which for you was now something constant to your everyday life, it's all valid to be greedy and spend time with them. His feelings kind of correlates with mine at some point so I kinda teared up on that part. As for his lover, I love the fact that he would rather sacrifice himself than see mc's destroy himself for something that couldn't be changed anymore.
SHORT AND BITTER. wish I could make a Sabrina Carpenter reference rn (short n sweet) but I can't. solid story 10/10. realistic characters and scenario, IT'S GIVING CUP OF JOE MULTO TREWWW?!
okay so basically I just found this on TikTok and since it's short, I thought maybe I can give this a quick read and see how it is. IT IS BAD. At first I was wondering why there was smut when in my point of view it was kind of necessary, but then all of a sudden I remember the panel where he says he had YEARNED for his lover and obviously that might have been part of the yearning part and also somehow a message on what love/yearning could do to people or something along the lines of those. THANKFULLY IT'S SHORT because I wouldn't have survived.
As for mc's feelings, totally valid. When you lost someone, which for you was now something constant to your everyday life, it's all valid to be greedy and spend time with them. His feelings kind of correlates with mine at some point so I kinda teared up on that part. As for his lover, I love the fact that he would rather sacrifice himself than see mc's destroy himself for something that couldn't be changed anymore.
SHORT AND BITTER. wish I could make a Sabrina Carpenter reference rn (short n sweet) but I can't. solid story 10/10. realistic characters and scenario, IT'S GIVING CUP OF JOE MULTO TREWWW?!