idk if it’s just the first chapters that have bad writing or why people like this so much but i can’t get past ch14 it’s sooooo boring it feels like ur witnessing someone’s roleplay on twitter idk. literally just this: (them in a suggestive scenario) vampire guy: “ur so cute” bottom: “s-stop” vampire: *bites him* and then they bang and it keeps going for the longest time omfg i got tired of it sorry im sure it has potential but it didn’t immediately hook me so bye
idk if it’s just the first chapters that have bad writing or why people like this so much but i can’t get past ch14 it’s sooooo boring it feels like ur witnessing someone’s roleplay on twitter idk. literally just this:
(them in a suggestive scenario)
vampire guy: “ur so cute”
bottom: “s-stop”
vampire: *bites him*
and then they bang
and it keeps going for the longest time omfg i got tired of it sorry im sure it has potential but it didn’t immediately hook me so bye