Listen. Like it’s kinda okay, but I had to drop it at ch. 8 already. It’s too cliche for me, and the buildup of their feelings is too quick and doesn’t make sense. (This might be a short story so that might be why but I digress)
I get that MC is scared of ghosts and all but did he really need to ACTUALLY masterbate to the guy over the phone? To scare the ghosts away? they barely know each other. And then he does it he typical, “How did I get here?” moment. Like brotha, that was all you lmao. And they’re both grownnnn men, why is MC so… simple?
Listen. Like it’s kinda okay, but I had to drop it at ch. 8 already. It’s too cliche for me, and the buildup of their feelings is too quick and doesn’t make sense. (This might be a short story so that might be why but I digress)
I get that MC is scared of ghosts and all but did he really need to ACTUALLY masterbate to the guy over the phone? To scare the ghosts away? they barely know each other. And then he does it he typical, “How did I get here?” moment. Like brotha, that was all you lmao. And they’re both grownnnn men, why is MC so… simple?