am I the only one who found the dialogue/narration a little cringe?

You're not the only one. Most of these yaoi manhwa has the same cookie cutter art,cringe dialogue,ridiculous setting, dragged out plot and the same big buff tree trunk dick guys.

There are some good ones out there but unfortunately most of the new manhwa are usually like this.At least I'm looking at more unique artstyles and anatomy in manga (=・ω・=)