you don’t have to agree but

Yuniki June 6, 2025 7:46 am

Okay. Please hear out my review,… you don’t have to agree #-.-).

For one I thought the story had the potential to be fantastic. HOWEVER, by the time story started to actually develop, the whole thing fell off. The major part being because of pacing and personal, especially the arc of the ml and fl falling in love, as it was super rushed and FORCED. Their “chemistry” was so bad, because of there almost weird instant connection ( which I know wasn’t instant but was clearly rushed for the sake of the plot ) their love it just felt off. In comparison to the 2nd ml and fl who had the time to develop their relationship. If the story was meant to be a love story ( which is clearly stated through the title ) it should have been handled differently. Since the story focused more on the 2nd ml ( which would be fine IF that was the FUCKING POINT ) it fails to actually be a good story for the ml and fl. The story was frustrating. Had it been a stories of spies who overcame hardships together through a forced cohabitation, it would have been amazing. But instead it was a story of a dude getting fucked over by his friends and family. Worst of all, the justice he gets is lackluster for all that he had suffered though.

I know the review dosent consider any other way this story could have been perceived but that’s just how I think about it (⌒▽⌒). Please give me some thoughts about this ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ

Responses
    Yuniki June 6, 2025 7:48 am

    Correction ( I thought it was bad because of pacing and perspective! Not pacing and personal )