For anyone who wants to start reading here's my review: I can see that the plot had poten...

R.A June 7, 2025 9:35 pm

For anyone who wants to start reading here's my review:
I can see that the plot had potential but writing and pacing ruined it. Everything's too obvious. You don't have to explain everything but rather show it with expressions, behaviour and character developments.
The art looks shiny and that's about it. It doesn't have the fundamental structures. The characters look stiff. As an artist myself I just couldn't get over this gorgeous hollow diamond.

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