Don’t read if you butthurt

Stop reading my comment if you want to enjoy the story without being affected by what others thinking. This is my own observation, feel free to think differently. I warned you ok.


I just finished the whole novel and annoyed as hell. I like the premise so much to the point I was willing to binge-read the novel in one go. There was not a single damn development on Muhyuk at all. The dialog didn’t flow. Always dismissed after one or two sentences exchange, all characters seemed not interested talking what was on their mind and shut each other out with “I don’t wanna hear” or “shut up, you’re annoying”. A lot of questions didn’t answered and just brushed off.

Muhyuk often described as expressionless and indifferent until the end of stories. Yes he did cry but because he didn’t show emotion development throughout the story, the moment he cried just came so unnatural. The writer really pushed hard the idea of Kim Muhyuk the stongest, know-it-all and rude esper to the point I find it hard to emphatize with him cos it was really pushed til the end.

Hajung always try to find truth here and there just to realised Muhyuk always ahead of him knowing it all. There was no equal footing there. The main cause of the conflict was obsession, and Muhyuk, the supposed to be the ML, also show nothing but obsession, the irony. The moment Hajung confessed his true identity, I thought there will be a change in Muhyuk’s emotion, nope nope nope still expressionlessly do whatever he wants without proper communication with Hajung. I know the charm of a rude main character, but if it was written with no development, not just Hajung, the reader would be also kept in the dark of the intention.