the author is in the wrong genre that's for sure I don't know if this whole thing was born out of her kink but this would've been more acceptable had she made it as straight porn. Atleast peole would already expect this kind of shitty plot there. Much better than creating a story so pretentious it reeks. This got no character development, complexity, and even the romance is so forced cuz yea someone who got treated like a dog, experienced all kinds of humiliation, would truly love the perpetrator right? and those damn expressions lol you'd think they're just role-playing and they're a couple with a kink. cuz what the heck its like seeing the torture from a rose-colored glasses
the author is in the wrong genre that's for sure I don't know if this whole thing was born out of her kink but this would've been more acceptable had she made it as straight porn. Atleast peole would already expect this kind of shitty plot there. Much better than creating a story so pretentious it reeks. This got no character development, complexity, and even the romance is so forced cuz yea someone who got treated like a dog, experienced all kinds of humiliation, would truly love the perpetrator right? and those damn expressions lol you'd think they're just role-playing and they're a couple with a kink. cuz what the heck its like seeing the torture from a rose-colored glasses