
cliche, feels like it was written by a 14 yrs old on wattpad, the fl acts like a teenager when shes litr a 30 something yrs old grownass woman plus her body is so y/n coded like wdym u got boobs bigger than ur head but ur waist is tiny like wth is holding the weight of them then?? the ml is ur average nonchalant rich guy hes boring ash n his bangs r ugly, his family is boring too. its just uninteresting n a literal snoozefest, its been 56 chaps n absolutely no development w the plot just sex sex sex

It’s fucking shit. The fl is 30 but acts like she’s a 15-year-old her big ass titties are bigger than her brain. She looks like as if a bug and an alien were to ever have a baby. The ml it’s so fucking ugly he stalks that thing for absolutely no reason like I don’t know why he’s so obsessed with it. I mean, just look at the cover. It’s giving Wattpad dark romance written by a 16-year-old. Plus the author is a man. I hope he stops fucking writing.

ive read a few chapters here and there in a fever addled daze. i think it very much leans into those tiktok wattpad biker guy x just an ordinary pretty (but not too pretty) girl romance tropes. even the art gives it that vibe. i read one panel last ch where u can rly tell the artist was trying to give the ml the trademark rough veiny biker boy hands which gives me an ick for some reason. also the mc just looks hella weird. its not just the art style because the author clearly knows how to draw how clothes look on a normal human being (aka all of the men) but for some reason clothes on her mysteriously get an ig warp filter. also they lean WAYYY too hard into her being unknowingly sexy. it just feels so y/n idk how else to explain it. if u dont get what im talking abt just read the latest chapter.

Ok I dropped it already but my complaints..... The FL looks like a bug, but sorry she isn't pretty, I find her super uglyyg., The body with watermelon boobs and booty but somehow everything else is just bones...the face is uglyyy OMG, it looks like an alien. The ML looks weird too, like a fridge, his expressions are super irritating.. All of his family members looks exactly like him, same face syndrome istg. He has no personality other than stalking that alien. Her ex is more interesting than this fridge. ML feels like a textbook ml with no fucking development and personality, he feels like AI, he has no faults. And the FL being 30 yr old, why she acts like a fucking teenager. The story revolves around sex and her ex. I knew author was on some y/n shit when it released. The story is boring too. It's just sax sux, cheating ex etc, same old story. ( ̄へ ̄)
~Tears on a Withered Flower~
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