I rewrote the whole manhwa to prove it could've been better

Jiyeonie_xie June 11, 2025 3:24 am

Basically instead of ML here needing sex to win cause of his jinx, it's his self-esteem and how he's a gay boxer which here comes homophobia that's actually the problem. His self esteem is so low that it distracts him during fighting and it stresses him out but it also makes him mad asf cus bottled up emotions of men being homophobic to him, how's he's literally judged for it. Reminder he's a boxer and most ppl still expects them to be straight, so in here he's still a winner by game but mentally wise it's not okay enough for him. He still feels defeated


Then that's where MC comes in, he literally massages him and since he's literally much more older than Jaekyung, so he gives him advices during like the whole session. How to boost his self esteem. Then they become closer each session.

Now onto Kim Dan, he's still in a huge debt. Despite looking all wiseful to Jaekyung, his life is tragic and he's still an alcoholic and quite a smoker. He's depressed but he sees Jaekyung as an inspiration to keep on fighting. His job here isn't only one but kind of multiple to ass more layers to his struggles and yes there's still gangs coming at him but he can fight them himself as he learns alot from Jaekyung.

About the debt? It's settled by Jaekyung when he founds out how bad of a life kim Dan has, like maybe one day the gang was too powerful for him and dude happens to be like visiting him at his house or something, he sees him all beat up and takes him into the hospital. He helps kim Dan out there.

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