MC could use some charisma tweaking.

Leon Reiner Luka s. Zess June 11, 2025 2:13 pm

MMMm The plot is interesting & the characters are ...ok...a bit...1 dimensional. MC is ur cliche caring & likes nature Gary Su type, in other words kind of bland. He also has the looks of a background character that appears only once to add to the ambience of the main characters...Im sorry but he's just not very...memorable. If this story didn't focus on him I totally would not remember who he was. (I'm in no way trying to hate on this one, I'm simply stating my 1st impression unbiased opinion.)
Decent smut scenes though at least.

Maybe we will get more character development once the baby's are born?
Till then I will put this one on hold. (●'◡'●)ノ

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