Idk if it’s just me but I’m not really enjoying the story, mostly cause their feelings...

covalence June 12, 2025 8:26 am

Idk if it’s just me but I’m not really enjoying the story, mostly cause their feelings change so quickly and the fl’s personality goes from one side to the other, at first it was refreshing but now it just feels like the author didn’t know how to write her. Especially with the ml. It was obvious at the beginning that she atleast showed interest in him and wanted to marry him but when he starts showing the same interest she wants to end the engagement? She’s very obviously depending on the book way too much and having it change the way she feels about people, the characters and the plot itself all just feel way too fickle.

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    Mayo Nessa June 13, 2025 9:45 am

    It also doesn't help that there is zero chemistry between MC and ML. I also find MC to be wishy-washy about what to do. Case in point, deciding to stay away from red head then suddenly she's not doing so. Liking the ML and doing actions that encourage feelings to grow then suddenly he throws him to red head. I can't take the characters seriously at all.

    I also saw spoilers and it just devolves from here. Personally, I just couldn't muster the patience to read more.

    MissPickles June 19, 2025 9:03 am

    Well it's because the book said that she will die by Maria's hands. That's when she started doubting her feelings for Ricardo, thinking that if she truly loved him she wouldn’t be scared to die.

    covalence June 19, 2025 3:25 pm
    Well it's because the book said that she will die by Maria's hands. That's when she started doubting her feelings for Ricardo, thinking that if she truly loved him she wouldn’t be scared to die. MissPickles

    dawg, you’re going to be scared to die, it’s human, all those other stories where they don’t gaf there is literally something wrong with them psychologically. the other stories have normalized putting everything you are and live for up for their partner and it’s just not true in reality

    MissPickles June 19, 2025 8:31 pm
    dawg, you’re going to be scared to die, it’s human, all those other stories where they don’t gaf there is literally something wrong with them psychologically. the other stories have normalized putting ev... covalence

    Yeah I agree lol. At least to hesitate for a moment. I think in FL's case it's completely legitimate cuz the ML was never nice to her either except one time in their childhood. Can you truly love someone you're not dating anyway? One sided crush? I think it's not a big deal in that case lol