I actually think that's better. Some people cope with death differently, like they're trying to survive in a ruined world yk. Uwugobrr
Even if that's the case it lacked depth I seen some work where when someone die they pretend that person never existed or he is still alive somewhere even tho they know he died or like talking as if everything was okay than break down eventually
This is original
I just don't like the way she passed the maid death to quickly it lack a bit of depth