Honestly I had a bit of hope for this. Fl was strong and smart, m-i-l seemed like she was sharp since she called the homewrecker cunning and realized this from early on and even figured out yhat fl was abused and neglected by her own family. Ml even seemed good since fl literally told him how the homewrecker was and he seemed to be good material. And then it just went downhill for me. (Notice I used past tense)*
Fl started blushing every time the ml called her wife even after he already told her he's marrying someone else and having a baby with her. My guess is that fl is actually preggers and it'll follow some overused trope. ...also have to wonder if the homewrecker is in cahoots with the people that has the grandpa hostage (haven't heard about him in at least 10 chaps). (Is that why ml is playing along with the bitch..i mean homewrecker? This would be another trope, but a better one)
When is Eiji, the boyfriend of the bitch, going to make an appearance? I bet this story may drag on..I had hoped it wouldn't
Also why in God's name would you let, albeit a lifesaver (who most likely orchestrated the whole thing), into the newlywed house and let her do what she was doing!?!? Like who in their right mind brings sand to the beach and then wonder if fl was gonna get hurt. Like wasn't the m-i-l married once? I put too much hope for common sense with these characters.
I like the butler and the 2nd ml guy (the son, I'm making him 2nd ml since he makes ml jealous and helps fl).
Fl recorded her half sister and stepmother but never figured to record the homewrecker? Homewrecker fell in the fl room yet she was told to apologize? Like the brains I thought these characters have just are no longer there. It's becoming a cliché story.
I think I'll let this sit til it has at least 90 or more chaps.
Honestly I had a bit of hope for this. Fl was strong and smart, m-i-l seemed like she was sharp since she called the homewrecker cunning and realized this from early on and even figured out yhat fl was abused and neglected by her own family. Ml even seemed good since fl literally told him how the homewrecker was and he seemed to be good material. And then it just went downhill for me. (Notice I used past tense)*
Fl started blushing every time the ml called her wife even after he already told her he's marrying someone else and having a baby with her. My guess is that fl is actually preggers and it'll follow some overused trope. ...also have to wonder if the homewrecker is in cahoots with the people that has the grandpa hostage (haven't heard about him in at least 10 chaps). (Is that why ml is playing along with the bitch..i mean homewrecker? This would be another trope, but a better one)
When is Eiji, the boyfriend of the bitch, going to make an appearance? I bet this story may drag on..I had hoped it wouldn't
Also why in God's name would you let, albeit a lifesaver (who most likely orchestrated the whole thing), into the newlywed house and let her do what she was doing!?!? Like who in their right mind brings sand to the beach and then wonder if fl was gonna get hurt. Like wasn't the m-i-l married once? I put too much hope for common sense with these characters.
I like the butler and the 2nd ml guy (the son, I'm making him 2nd ml since he makes ml jealous and helps fl).
Fl recorded her half sister and stepmother but never figured to record the homewrecker? Homewrecker fell in the fl room yet she was told to apologize? Like the brains I thought these characters have just are no longer there. It's becoming a cliché story.
I think I'll let this sit til it has at least 90 or more chaps.