And you have knowledge and experience with bdsm?
Well yes I do
So what makes his story suck? I agree its not perfect but fairly better than most webtoons in the consent department (the bar is literally in hell)
Well yeah the bar is in hell and I'm aware that this is fictional and all.
But first if all the consent is unusually relatively leaking which isn't great. The Dom just does what ever he want and assumes the Sub will be into it. Can't remember them having a safe word and mind you the bottom started of as a virgin. The pace at which he started enjoying it is wayyyy to fast. And wayyy to hard from the beginning. You usually start slow ( especially if you have no experience) to figure out what you like.
Additional( at least for me ) the top isn't doing a good job being a Dom. Like yeah I have to point it out again. The sub started of as a VIRGIN and that Dom is a lot of things but emotional mature isn't one of them
Wait , I just checked they do have a safe word. And don't get me wrong I like them and all but this thing sure as hell ain't realistic. But of course there is wayyy worse out there as well. Like you said the bar is in hell
The pace depends on the sub. if you reread the webtoon, yuan was eager to try everything. If he wasnt, he would have told his dom. I see this as them testing out limits especially yuan's. It could be better, especially their first time but then again, the sub has all the power here and lets not forget the dom asking for feedback after a play session.
Didn’t the sub literally beg the Dom for this relationship. The Dom was against it because he said his taste is way too advanced for a beginner but the sub begged him for it on his knees
Yes! This too! The dom was against! Even said yuan should get some experience first too and when does he can call him back! The dude was literally on his knees begging!
As a representation of BDSM, this story kinda sucks. But I will let it slight since the top is enjoyable to look at