Not adding a spoiler warning because I feel like there’s nothing to spoil. Literally nothing fucking happens.
Very predictable first of all. You can already tell that the story is gonna have a hugeeeee miscommunication (bigger one than they alr have), uke is mad at seme, semes “secretly” liked uke all along, then the story turns into more plotless porn. And yes, I say MORE plotless porn because this shit has the storyline of a god damn saltine cracker.
I reallyyyy wanted to like this. The idea of the ukes secret identity, but not really secret because the seme simply forgot, was really interesting!!! It could’ve lead to a muchhhh more intriguing story with UNDERSTANDABLE crash outs / betrayals. But no. That whole plot line was dropped within the first few chapters. And for what??? More sex?????
The art is ok, definitely have seen better, and the characters are one demential. Even if you read this with the intention of having a wank and not for the plot, this isn’t even good fucking porn.
Maybe, MAYBE, I’ll let this marinate and give it some time for some actual story advancements or art style improvements. Until then however, this shit is not being touched again
This shit is so ass
Not adding a spoiler warning because I feel like there’s nothing to spoil. Literally nothing fucking happens.
Very predictable first of all. You can already tell that the story is gonna have a hugeeeee miscommunication (bigger one than they alr have), uke is mad at seme, semes “secretly” liked uke all along, then the story turns into more plotless porn. And yes, I say MORE plotless porn because this shit has the storyline of a god damn saltine cracker.
I reallyyyy wanted to like this. The idea of the ukes secret identity, but not really secret because the seme simply forgot, was really interesting!!! It could’ve lead to a muchhhh more intriguing story with UNDERSTANDABLE crash outs / betrayals. But no. That whole plot line was dropped within the first few chapters. And for what??? More sex?????
The art is ok, definitely have seen better, and the characters are one demential. Even if you read this with the intention of having a wank and not for the plot, this isn’t even good fucking porn.
Maybe, MAYBE, I’ll let this marinate and give it some time for some actual story advancements or art style improvements. Until then however, this shit is not being touched again