1-5: ok so the pacing and story telling is all over the place. as of now the mc is a jarry sue (not unexpected but it’s very egregious here). world building is where it’s the worst tbh, I get this is meant to be a game so they just add some game-ish stuff without really explaining and expecting you to know but they forgot that WE THE READERS don’t know this game. It’s not like other isekai where it’s loosely mmo rpg based but as of now the rules of the world is loocy goosy
1-5: ok so the pacing and story telling is all over the place. as of now the mc is a jarry sue (not unexpected but it’s very egregious here). world building is where it’s the worst tbh, I get this is meant to be a game so they just add some game-ish stuff without really explaining and expecting you to know but they forgot that WE THE READERS don’t know this game. It’s not like other isekai where it’s loosely mmo rpg based but as of now the rules of the world is loocy goosy