one thing i appreciate about this story is the fact that while the MC clearly has a love interest, they don't immediately make them interact and exist in each others space. like, its rare to see stories like this where the MC and ML aren't always together. pretty unique and refreshing ngl. The fact that romance isn't even in her mind and her world immediately don't revolve around the ML (who, at this, point, she hasn't even met officially. Also pretty unique for stories like this to not show the ML mysteriously in every other chapter. THIS is how you create a real mysterious ML. he just exists in the background unobtrusively. his identity isn't even hinted or revealed yet
one thing i appreciate about this story is the fact that while the MC clearly has a love interest, they don't immediately make them interact and exist in each others space. like, its rare to see stories like this where the MC and ML aren't always together. pretty unique and refreshing ngl. The fact that romance isn't even in her mind and her world immediately don't revolve around the ML (who, at this, point, she hasn't even met officially. Also pretty unique for stories like this to not show the ML mysteriously in every other chapter. THIS is how you create a real mysterious ML. he just exists in the background unobtrusively. his identity isn't even hinted or revealed yet