There are a few odd moments, but overall I liked the story. But Jekwon's like next level stupid.
He goes into a rut and instead of just TELLING Yian that and saying "that's why you can't come near me right now," he just does a generic "stay back and leave." I mean maybe it's embarrassing to explain that to someone who isn't close to you? But Yian's his sex partner by this point, it's probably a good thing to disclose actually. And cuz he didn't actually SAY anything, Yian in his lovestruck worry decides to check up on him anyway and gets involved. And then of course, when he gets into a rut AGAIN when they are MARRIED, he still hides it and lies about his whereabouts? BRO JUST TELL HIM! DAMN! He just creates misunderstandings because he doesn't talk.
He also does this with Yian's confession. When he first hears it, he thinks that he should end their sexual relationship cuz sure, the feelings would change everything. But Yian forgot, so he's like nvm. And that's like whatever I guess. But the manz still goes all "Wow he acting so normal does he even like me? Doesn't seem like does." And gets upset when he thinks Yian might not like him. Or he continues to treat Yian really well and worries over him. And he doesn't realize his feelings this whole time?? Like sure, you can be nice and not have feelings but actively getting jealous over the thought of him being with another man after Yian becomes an omega? But fine, okay, you can handwave this part away.
HOWEVER. When Yian rejects his marriage proposal, CLEARLY STATING it's because Jekwon doesn't even like him, manz just goes "do you not like me anymore??" AGAIN. Then goes like "if you like me, why won't you marry me." HE ALREADY TOLD YOU WHY HE WON'T MARRY YOU. And then Jekwon OBVIOUSLY has feelings for him but just can't notice it. I don't get that part, Jekwon had a lover before. And he was upset over the lover cheating. I'd assume he would know when he likes someone, even if he has never liked them to the degree he likes Yian. Like I'm sorry, I feel like the author just had Jekwon not realize his feelings to drag out the misunderstanding and drama.
Also the miscarriage part. Even though Yian wasn't pregnant so never had a miscarriage, I didn't like that Jekwon decided to hide the miscarriage from Yian to avoid making him upset. Like even if Yian was pregnant and had a miscarriage, he has the right to know. It's literally HIS BODY.
And when Yian said he wanted Jekwon's child, Jekwon decides to hide that the doctor said he would have a hard pregnancy. Decides to just CAUSE PROBLEMS by saying "I never want kids." Like first of all, you should make sure you're on the same page about children before marriage. Second of all, if the reasoning was just because it would be hard on Yian, JUST TELL HIM. Again, it is HIS BODY. He has the right to know whether pregnancy would be hard on him or not. The doctor should have mentioned that fact to Yian as well, even if it makes him sad. Seriously, I feel like Jekwon was the cause of most of the conflicts in this story lolll
Also, I didn't like Yian saying he resents Jekwon for turning him into an omega, but I think he just said that to make Jekwon leave him alone since he was all "hurr hurr why no marry me you like me >:(." Because I mean. Yian is the one who chose to start the relationship with Jekwon. It was consensual.
In conclusion, it's still mostly Jekwon being the cause of most of the conflicts. I feel like author just wanted to drag it out for the sake of the story too.
Side Note: I also did like that Jekwon actually went through ruts because a lot of omegaverse I've read just has the omega suffer through heats while ruts were just not as frequent. So that's a plus.
TL;DR: I liked the story, but Jekwon's a master of miscommunication and the cause of most misunderstandings.
There are a few odd moments, but overall I liked the story.
But Jekwon's like next level stupid.
He goes into a rut and instead of just TELLING Yian that and saying "that's why you can't come near me right now," he just does a generic "stay back and leave." I mean maybe it's embarrassing to explain that to someone who isn't close to you? But Yian's his sex partner by this point, it's probably a good thing to disclose actually. And cuz he didn't actually SAY anything, Yian in his lovestruck worry decides to check up on him anyway and gets involved. And then of course, when he gets into a rut AGAIN when they are MARRIED, he still hides it and lies about his whereabouts? BRO JUST TELL HIM! DAMN! He just creates misunderstandings because he doesn't talk.
He also does this with Yian's confession. When he first hears it, he thinks that he should end their sexual relationship cuz sure, the feelings would change everything. But Yian forgot, so he's like nvm. And that's like whatever I guess. But the manz still goes all "Wow he acting so normal does he even like me? Doesn't seem like does." And gets upset when he thinks Yian might not like him. Or he continues to treat Yian really well and worries over him. And he doesn't realize his feelings this whole time?? Like sure, you can be nice and not have feelings but actively getting jealous over the thought of him being with another man after Yian becomes an omega? But fine, okay, you can handwave this part away.
HOWEVER. When Yian rejects his marriage proposal, CLEARLY STATING it's because Jekwon doesn't even like him, manz just goes "do you not like me anymore??" AGAIN. Then goes like "if you like me, why won't you marry me." HE ALREADY TOLD YOU WHY HE WON'T MARRY YOU. And then Jekwon OBVIOUSLY has feelings for him but just can't notice it. I don't get that part, Jekwon had a lover before. And he was upset over the lover cheating. I'd assume he would know when he likes someone, even if he has never liked them to the degree he likes Yian. Like I'm sorry, I feel like the author just had Jekwon not realize his feelings to drag out the misunderstanding and drama.
Also the miscarriage part. Even though Yian wasn't pregnant so never had a miscarriage, I didn't like that Jekwon decided to hide the miscarriage from Yian to avoid making him upset. Like even if Yian was pregnant and had a miscarriage, he has the right to know. It's literally HIS BODY.
And when Yian said he wanted Jekwon's child, Jekwon decides to hide that the doctor said he would have a hard pregnancy. Decides to just CAUSE PROBLEMS by saying "I never want kids." Like first of all, you should make sure you're on the same page about children before marriage. Second of all, if the reasoning was just because it would be hard on Yian, JUST TELL HIM. Again, it is HIS BODY. He has the right to know whether pregnancy would be hard on him or not. The doctor should have mentioned that fact to Yian as well, even if it makes him sad. Seriously, I feel like Jekwon was the cause of most of the conflicts in this story lolll
Also, I didn't like Yian saying he resents Jekwon for turning him into an omega, but I think he just said that to make Jekwon leave him alone since he was all "hurr hurr why no marry me you like me >:(." Because I mean. Yian is the one who chose to start the relationship with Jekwon. It was consensual.
In conclusion, it's still mostly Jekwon being the cause of most of the conflicts. I feel like author just wanted to drag it out for the sake of the story too.
Side Note: I also did like that Jekwon actually went through ruts because a lot of omegaverse I've read just has the omega suffer through heats while ruts were just not as frequent. So that's a plus.
TL;DR: I liked the story, but Jekwon's a master of miscommunication and the cause of most misunderstandings.