out of most stories I read the pacing is kind of slow, but I feel like they take their time for us to get to know the couples the ending is kind of lackluster but I get it as a writer You don’t know when to end it. If I would add I feel like having a 10 year time skip with the focus being on the pink straight dude. overall great story didn’t feel like a waste of time or it was too rushed and surprisingly rare both couples had enough screen time to get to know their relationship to the point that they could honestly have two different shorter stories about the two couple. if you actually take your time and not looking for drama with this story, it’s a really well written story. I think the writer did a good job of making all the main characters likable and you really can understand where they’re coming from. it’s one of the few stories that don’t have me pulling out. hair out of my scalp. Best of all this is absolutely the bare minimum. It’s not toxic at all,It’s messy at some parts, but not toxic.
out of most stories I read the pacing is kind of slow, but I feel like they take their time for us to get to know the couples the ending is kind of lackluster but I get it as a writer You don’t know when to end it. If I would add I feel like having a 10 year time skip with the focus being on the pink straight dude. overall great story didn’t feel like a waste of time or it was too rushed and surprisingly rare both couples had enough screen time to get to know their relationship to the point that they could honestly have two different shorter stories about the two couple. if you actually take your time and not looking for drama with this story, it’s a really well written story. I think the writer did a good job of making all the main characters likable and you really can understand where they’re coming from. it’s one of the few stories that don’t have me pulling out. hair out of my scalp. Best of all this is absolutely the bare minimum. It’s not toxic at all,It’s messy at some parts, but not toxic.