No hate but honestly considering dropping.

Beaniebby June 20, 2025 4:06 pm

Decided to finally catch up after waiting weeks for the story to build up after I was told this chapter was gonna be a good one and finally the turning point. Andddddd.... I'm so disappointed am I the only one who feels like the story is stagnant? Or am I just impatient? I can't tell. Not bashing the author but I've just read all these chapters and I honestly feel like nothing is happening it feels like I'm on a merry go around. The pacing feels slow, I dont see the chemistry between the characters, the characters themeselves feel kinda bland, there isn't no type of progress. Yes there's dialogue but honestly that doesn't go anywhere it just the same stuff repeated in different font. This latest chapter seems weird. Instead of him saying they have a relationship he basically implies she is prostituting herself to him to pay off a debt. Like huh? This the image he wanted to portray after saying so many times how he is basically in love/infatuated with her. Idk if I'm tripping tell me. Maybe the story is going over my head and I'm missing stuff.

Responses
    Bia~ June 20, 2025 4:10 pm

    I completely agree. What an ass way to stall the bomb drop. We're past the point of frustration already

    Beaniebby June 20, 2025 4:17 pm
    I completely agree. What an ass way to stall the bomb drop. We're past the point of frustration already Bia~

    I'm so confused by this chapter. Because if you wanted him to feel bad about leaving her with debt you didn't have to get half naked,throw underwear on the ground, and display a condom wrapper. It's giving you want him to think she slanging ass in place of cash. It seem dumb to me it would've been better if he said he was just a friend and let the thoughts torment him on figuring out whats happening. But no you want him to think she's a prostitute. Um ok.

    Bia~ June 20, 2025 10:50 pm
    I'm so confused by this chapter. Because if you wanted him to feel bad about leaving her with debt you didn't have to get half naked,throw underwear on the ground, and display a condom wrapper. It's giving you ... Beaniebby

    i just dont get it. Whats a better revenge than letting minshit know the woman he was sooooo sure worshipped him has MOVED ON??? let him KNOW it, RUB IT on he's face! There's NO point to this stupid "she's whoring herself out for money" plot other than to drag the story longer. Pure BULLSHIT I tell you.