First chapter alone would have made an enjoyable one shot. Slow start and fetish, boring ass protag. But it *can* be, in a world, good. Yuri tag is probably for the fifth girl, as she likes her older sister but since it's not the major theme, the tag should be remove...
First chapter alone would have made an enjoyable one shot.
Slow start and fetish, boring ass protag. But it *can* be, in a world, good.
Yuri tag is probably for the fifth girl, as she likes her older sister but since it's not the major theme, the tag should be remove...