It's just a series of strung together events that don't really affect the next one. Kinda disappointing considering that it's the author of Hate Mate, which did feel very tight narratively.
for example even if he didn’t say it explicitly, he was clearly affected by his mom dying & felt guilty about enjoying the day with ml not knowing what happened & then it’s just never mentioned again?
for example even if he didn’t say it explicitly, he was clearly affected by his mom dying & felt guilty about enjoying the day with ml not knowing what happened & then it’s just never mentioned agai... Magical Mo
Or even how it's basically started like 3 different times. You think "oh it's a little dork and mysterious blonde" "oh it's this lady's weird brother being a predator in a triangle" "oh he's disappeared and there's gonna be a time skip" and none have planned out
It's just a series of strung together events that don't really affect the next one. Kinda disappointing considering that it's the author of Hate Mate, which did feel very tight narratively.