Well I'm in the middle of reading it and I wanna say yohan deserves not death vut torture ...

YourMochi June 24, 2025 1:46 pm

Well I'm in the middle of reading it and I wanna say yohan deserves not death vut torture for the eternity his soul never find peace he deserved everything bad that can happen.....and yes adults should not listen to kids:)

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    YourMochi June 24, 2025 1:50 pm

    And such a bad writing in this particular chapter cause at least make it makes sense even if it's fantasy ...you want to tell me a half pureblood could hypnotized a pureblood that easily and kill him is just dumb like how could a pure blood not be able to kill half pureblood:D

    Woomb August 12, 2025 3:21 pm
    And such a bad writing in this particular chapter cause at least make it makes sense even if it's fantasy ...you want to tell me a half pureblood could hypnotized a pureblood that easily and kill him is just du... YourMochi

    Why do you think someone taken by surprise would be able to defend themselves ? He saw more of the sweet,
    selfless, and caring kid version of Yohan than the psychotic version, obviously he was going to let his guard down in front of him crying and apologising.
    Don't blame your lack of understanding on the writing lol

    YourMochi August 12, 2025 3:31 pm
    Why do you think someone taken by surprise would be able to defend themselves ? He saw more of the sweet,selfless, and caring kid version of Yohan than the psychotic version, obviously he was going to let his g... Woomb

    It's bad writing there's nothing deep in this scene so sit down mister understand it all ...the power diff is too big to make it look so easy so no that is just BAD writing

    Woomb August 12, 2025 5:09 pm
    It's bad writing there's nothing deep in this scene so sit down mister understand it all ...the power diff is too big to make it look so easy so no that is just BAD writing YourMochi

    Again, just because you lack basic comprehension skills doesn't make it bad writing lol.

    Woomb August 12, 2025 5:10 pm
    It's bad writing there's nothing deep in this scene so sit down mister understand it all ...the power diff is too big to make it look so easy so no that is just BAD writing YourMochi

    It's such a simple concept too so it really is baffling that you don't get it.